WALT: Use adjectives (describing words) to make our writing interesting to the reader.
We pretended we were a soldier in the war, using our senses to describe what it was like.
I saw...giant explosions every where.
I heard...loud gun shots every 5 seconds.
I felt...horrified of getting out the trenches because there where huge guns going off.
I wondered...if I would survive.
To Jayme,
ReplyDeleteI wonder if horrified is the best word to use for I felt? Could nervous, scared, petrified be ones that better describe how you felt about leaving the trenches? You have added adjectives to your sentences well Jayme. Could you add an adjective to describe the trenches at all?
From Mrs Head
nice poem jayme from riley
ReplyDeletenice poem jayme from riley
ReplyDeleteto mrs head. Ok mrs haed.
Deletethank Riley . from jayme !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Deletethank Riley . from jayme !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Deleteto mrs head. Ok mrs haed.
Deleteto mrs head. Ok mrs haed.
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